Twinkling Starz

What does it mean, anyway?

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Here I am, alone I walk Down roads of rocks and ice. There’s no one here with which to talk They left after giving advice. The third line needs a ...

I understood it a bit, but I don't see how the title fits with it, and the whole thing is a little too descriptive.

This is very sad. Very powerful, though. Wonderful work. -*Twinkles

Very nice. In the first four stanzas, you use 'the' too many times. Well done. -*Twinkles

That's great coulorizing! Great work!

Quite right, quite right. An amazing, amazing piece. I..I..don't know how to say it. I weep for ones who have not read is most beautiful!

Good work. The last line is nice, like Madhatter said. This was very interesting.

I do not like the last line. I am not sure what this poem means, but the last line kinda ruined it. The rest of the poem is quite well ...

I like the way you ended each stanza with stating that something is over. It really gave flavor to the poem. I know lyric poetry is not supposed to have ...

I like this it is very simple and just touching on things. Your writing style is very good, and the imagery/metaphors you use are wonderful. You are a talented writer. ...

I don't like the last stanza much, the image there disgusts me, but I think it's a good ending, good work. I would have to say that the first stanza ...

Em, it's a good start, but we need a bit more. Also, houselves cannot quit, they must be given clothing from their owners.

Very whimsical and happy. I really love it. Wonderful work. The imagery is fabulous and I really like the last stanza, it really wrapped it up. -*Twinkles